There are dangers, in the vaults

There are dangers, in the vaults.
Men-eating ghouls, rat as big as hounds,
distant eerie tunes, creepy glowing runes,
dragons of flame, elves of deadly aim,
slimes that eat your flesh,
birds that gouge your eyes,
stirges that bleed you dry
(not to talk of the vampires),
and the whole lots of goblins, ogres and kobolds,
not to forget of the Great Underground Hobgoblin Empire.

There are dangers, in the vaults.
Vorpal scythes,
swallowing pits
disintegrating purple rays
poisonous darts,
electrifying plates,
and don’t try to pull
any of the five chains.

There are dangers, in the vaults.
Gold shining, gems glittering,
tomes full of forbidden lore, relics of the kings of yore,
riches making honest men
greedy like fallen dwarves
and things ending up in strange places,
steel blades beneath shoulder blades,
hemlock in wine bottles,
people left in deep pits.

There are dangers in the vaults.
And,
trust me this time,
the meanest, darkest,
nastiest,
most disappointing of them all, are
“Adventurers armed and dangerous”.
people you used to call
“mates”.

There are dangers, in the vaults.
You don’t get to
pick yours, son.

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5 thoughts on “There are dangers, in the vaults

  1. The first 3 stanzas are great, the end is a bit weak\abrupt. Great effort, though. Send it in to Fight On! maybe.

    • heh, I know.
      Haven’t written anything like it maybe 10 years, and writing poetry if you’re not a native speaker of the target language is hard enough.
      It’s just a little something I wanted to try. It sounds nice enough. Wanted more alliterations but it came way hard.

      Might cut the 4th stanza and the end tho 🙂

  2. I like the specifics. Hemlock, shoulder blades, purple rays. I see a lot of pits though, maybe switch some of those up with other types of pits (crevasses, holes, chutes, etc).

    • I like pits. It’s my favourite kind of trap. And pits link different dungeon levels. And can host monsers 😉
      But thanks for that 😀

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